My shot at a fanfic ~ Gundam Light of Dawn

[Retune]

Originally Posted by Kurisu

I'm fine with that. Two personalities huh.

Her clumsy personality should be similar to Isumi Saginomiya, while the Smart Commander Type will be uh, Hinagiku Katsura. That be fine?

I would say yes, except I have no idea who those two are.

Now looking them up

[Crimsonred]

Hayate no gotoku

[Retune]

Originally Posted by Crimsonred

Hayate no gotoku

Googled them up. Reading character profiles and the like atm.

[Asuna]

Originally Posted by Retune

Googled them up. Reading character profiles and the like atm.

Sowwie, I should have provided earlier.

Originally Posted by Crimsonred

Hayate no gotoku

Was gonna shoot myself when I found out there was a Tai Drama made about this.

[Retune]

I just noticed that Yuuki from Vampire Knight not only has the same first name as Yuuki from my fanfic, but also has the same hair and eye colour, and build.

I only just read one chapter of Vampire Knight by recommendation of my friend.

What a coinkydink.

[Kenshiro]

Spoiler!

I would love to see a non-canon ending where the main protagonist turns into a bad guy and battles either Yuuki, Kira/Mai, or Lynn in a cliffhanger ending. Bad end ftw.

[Asuna]

Spoiler!

Or make the future girl that's here to stop whatever is gonna happen, fall in love with him and builds the way to change the future.

-cliche-

[Marisa]

Originally Posted by Kurisu

Spoiler!

Or make the future girl that's here to stop whatever is gonna happen, fall in love with him and builds the way to change the future.

-cliche-

Spoiler!

Or a girl who travelled back in time to become her own rapist in order to prevent his parent's from committing double suicide before she was even born.

[Kenshiro]

Originally Posted by Ivis

Spoiler!

Or a girl who travelled back in time to become her own rapist in order to prevent his parent's from committing double suicide before she was even born.

I thought I read something like this from a creepypasta in /x/

[Marisa]

it's actually an inside joke between me and quant LOL

[Kenshiro]

Lol what a weird time paradox.

[Retune]

Chapter 4 is out.

Spoiler!

Originally I was going to make Rei DEVA's lapdog. Then I decided against it. The result? Dream sequence go!

[Krath]

Ooh, the plot thickens.

[Kenshiro]

Wow. To be honest I wasn't expecting chapter 4 to be like that, but I really was impressed with the progression. Rei must've really loved Yuuki to be an idiot like that. It was beginning to sound less like Gundam but more like a detective story with all that smuggling and badguy busting. It works, it really does.

[Leongz]

I'm amazed with the story progression and I Liked the ending(chapter4).
Makes you want to know what's gonna happen next.

and For the effort !

[Asuna]

Chapter 4 sounds like a similar dumb MC in some lame Seed series, but it is a very good twist in the plot.

[Temjin747J]

wow, I was NOT expecting that at the end there, keep up the great work~

[Nemeniah]

Oh wow, that's some juicy development there. Keep up the good work !

[Retune]

Thanks for the comments guys ^^

I think I've watched too many psychological animes lately. I seem to have forgotten that this was meant to be a Gundam fanfic

[tehprognoob]

lol, we have to download?
you can't put it on FFN or sumthin'?
EDIT above: have you absorbed Evangelion yet? Haveyouhaveyouhaveyou???? the mother****ing king of psychological anime?