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I love Gundam and Loved Sdgo because there is Gundams in it.

And I have spare time as well. So I decided to write a little fanfics base on SDGO.

Here some summary of it:

SDGO fanfics trailer - The Baptism by Death ~ The Vow – Teaser

One of many who fighting in the middle of game of life…

“Shirogane Touya, launching in Destiny – Shirogane Custom….”

Fight with the dreadful enemies…

“Kyou..” I call my best buddy who was beside me with my radio “What kind of Units are our enemies using??”

“One Wing Gundam 0 Custom, A Nu Gundam, A Sword Impulse and FAZZ” he replied.

“This won’t gonna be easy fight”

“What do you expect from Pro-fight?”

“You right, Okay lets go!”


With the chaos of world, being calmed by the game, risking life to win.

…Gundam Battle, the most “peaceful” solution for maintaining the order of the chaotic world. In AC. 3001 human race already migrated to the Colony. The nature of human caused the war to break out. After a long and tiring war, One person, giving the idea to the U.N, that was to make the event where The Earth federation and Colony Federation can battle in peaceful using a robot which idea came from the Japan animation from the ancient era, Mobile Suit Gundam…

The breath-taking battle…

….But, one of the missile still after me, I pulled up my shield as fast as I can, and the missile hit my shield hard, enough to make my Unit loses balance. “Lookout, it’s a Fazz!! From behind the wreckage at One O’clock!!” I shouted to all my friend, trying to warn them. ‘I’ll pay them back, In double!!” said my buddy as he shot his Tallgeese rifle into the enemies….

…as my radar bleeped, telling me I was locked on by Wing Zero. My feet reacted to take me away from there, but, I know it already too late…


The beginning of destiny…

…At last, I’ve found my reason to fight….



and here the mentioned fanfics. Sorry about bad and short storyline.
The Baptism by Death ~ The Vow.doc

I am waiting for your response. Maybe I'll make another one if all of you give a positive response

Oh, if anyone want to be included in my fanfics feel free to tell me your nickname and short description of your pilot character (like your suit you want to be in, or your faction).

PS: the suit that can be included in story is the suits that already rolled and/or in use in TW server. because I can't write story if I haven't seen the suit in action.

Sincerely, Shirogane...

[UPDATE]




And Here Some bonus:
Spoiler!


And Now, Special Thanks Section for everyone appeared in my fics so far
Spoiler!
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I like it :]. Keep up the good work. But it could sure use some NuKira and his Freedom Custom. Hehe.

There's a site where you can post like this.

It's fanfiction.net

It's easier to organize into chapters.

Without further ado, if you can x//x. Please~ ;D

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Name : Sakira (I'm horrible at name making.)

Unit: Sword Impulse later (Since drk made a unit) Σ Impulse-CML (Impulse pack with Long Range beam cannon used on Destiny, Two long swords used on Sword Impulse, Firefly missiles on legs, Dual Lupus Beam Rifle, and Xiphias RailCannon on the hips.)

Age: 14

Description : As a young boy he was abandoned and force to pilot a Gundam from a military known as Neo-Librarian.

Ability : Neo-SEED allows him to react to everything around him much faster even slowing down time through his eyes.. However, he has to protect someone he loves to use it as opposed to most of the SEED characters being ANGRY to activate it most of the time.
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grammar needs some improvement, nice story overall tho, i like it...

and of course....addz me
Name : Sendo
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Description : Born to a family of soldiers. As a child was orphaned when a war hit his town. Was then adopted by a military official which later forces him to pilot a Gundam.
Ability : Has amazing reaction time and stamina due to training he recieved since young.
Suit : Pilots a custom black gundam F91 with stealth capability.
 
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Codename: Ryuma
Piloting Ryuma's Black Freedom Custom.
-can be found on Custom Paintjobs- thread page 5.
-age22
-just needs to change the world with his Gundam due to war.
Edit:
Special effect of Ryuma Custom:
Mirage Colloid System which allows cloaking.
Versatile in any range of combat.

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Thank u. And Fanfiction.net? already a member of it. and posted one or two fanfics. not all of them is Gundam though. I have many work that still in pending status. And about grammar, sorry 'bout that. Since I've graduated from senior highschool I rarely use proper English because all of my work mate won't use proper one. Instead they used more backstreet one. So, It was kinda affecting how I use english. Even in my work T T.

Working on second story then. I'll update all of it in first page. Thanks for your participation.
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Looks fun lol. *Makes up random stuff*

Name: Teikai, Toku
Date of Birth: Sept. 3 U.C. 0074

Background:
An orphan after losing his family at the age of 5 (U.C. 0079) in the attack on Side 7. Joins AEUG at the age of 13 (U.C. 0087) as an assistant engineer while training to be a MS pilot. Joins Londo Bell at age 19 (U.C. 0093) as a MS pilot. In the Second Neo Zeon Movment, he earns the nickname 'The Blind Blade of Londo Bell' for destroying 6 Geara Dogas with a Jegan after having its main camera damaged using only a beam saber.
In U.C. 0095, he receives a video message from a group called 'The Disenthralled', showing that his twin sister is still alive, held hostage, and will be killed unless he works for them. He deserts the Earth Federation after stealing the unused schematics for the MSZ-008 Z II from Anaheim Electronics, which The Disenthralled used to create his personal unit.
Currently operates under the codename: Dark Mercenary.

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MSZ-008B EnZ2 Gundam "Refrain"

Fixed armaments:
2 x 60mm vulcan gun, fire-linked, 600 rounds per gun, mounted in head
2 x 2-tube grenade launcher, 2 rounds per tube, mounted in forearms
2 x beam saber, stored in recharge racks in forearms, hand-carried in use

Optional fixed armaments:
Shield, mounted on left forearm
M270 "Vega" Gauss Cannon, mounted on back, folds out over left shoulder

Optional hand armaments:
XBR-M87A3 "Deneb" Beam Long Rifle, powered by replaceable e-pac, doubles as large beam saber, 2 spare e-pacs stored in shield
XBS-S99 "Altair" Hyper Beam Saber, directly powered by generator via cable, stored in rack on right hip armor, hand-carried in use
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Known As: UN-DC
A unknown pilot that uses a strange astray that looks like the gold frame and
a Freedom that bears the marking of amuro.
Has never been known to shown alliegance to any faction, but has rare MSes that are thought to be unique and classified.
Edit: Can he be the villian?

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Nice background story. But a bit too cliche.

Waiting for next chapter

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Ok, because I get many bright idea of character and customized unit. I'll try to make sure everyone can appear in my works later. Maybe not all at once, but I'll promise that I'll give you all a enough spotlight.

Ooh, And about the specialty of unit all of you want to have. I'll try to include that. Though, Sorry about this, but Mirrage Colloid or some Cloaking feature feels kinda cheap (especially if they were equipped by freedom and F91 that'll be nightmare, heheheh ) But, worry not, I'll think another abilities to make up for that.

My #2 work still in progress now. I'll update it later soon after it finished.

Thanks for all your suggestion. I already have organized all of your character info. And already use some of them.

Special notice: DarkMerc, I will certainly use your Z II and Refrain, since it was the nice original idea. But, do you have any MS that are in SDGO for starter unit that your character will first appear to? I'll intend to use your ZII and Refrain a bit later as the story progress. So tell me if you want to use any other unit.
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Special notice: DarkMerc, I will certainly use your Z II and Refrain, since it was the nice original idea. But, do you have any MS that are in SDGO for starter unit that your character will first appear to? I'll intend to use your ZII and Refrain a bit later as the story progress. So tell me if you want to use any other unit.

If from SDGO, probably start w/ Jegan then upgrade to custom painted AS Zeta...as for Refrain, I don't think anything has those weapons lol.
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Don't worry Darkmerc, I'll surely included your original in my work. without changing anything. You will be using your ZII in main storyline.

Opps, almost spoiled something there. Anyway I've uploaded the second chapter.

The new chapter, like the previous, may filled with mistakes here and there. But I hope all of you can cope with me for a while. anyway please enjoy
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Wait we could make one up? ;~;

Can I do that!?
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Neat. Can't wait to read more.
 
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damn.....i was hax before ryuma showed up....
 
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So who is this person that incured ryu's wrath?
(Pls don't try to answer that)
Very nice story though the grammar needs work
Maybe i could help to edit it?
 
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Please do, A Team work usually better than one man work.

If you don't mind, You can help to edit my work there. So I can focus more on storyline development.

And chap #3 is in progress. I need to gather some material first. Like how you guys like to do the Pvp (I don't need to see how Ryuma do his game, already experienced it firsthand). So I'll need some references to make fighting scene more, and lot more better.
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yay, fanfic, long time without reading one. hmmm hmmm

i did like it, its a nice way to justified the system of the game xD

and know, the "o plz at me in" moment:

name:Albert Cross
Nick: Cruzader (why? nobody knows)
age: 24 years old

background:
he is a mechanic and mecha enthusiasm, how loves to spend his time customizing units and trying to add things to the ms, he doesn't really belong to a group or mercenary clan, he kind of acts as a free lancer, participating mainly to test his new modifications on what ever ms he is currently using, with makes hims a rather "unstable" companion, sometimes his models are a force to deal with, other times, they malfunction 10 sec after the fight starts, and some times they are just plain dangerous to any one in a 5 miles radius, actually, he was recently ban form competition do to a incident involving a meteor system, and acguy, a zero system, and a badly build minovsky fusion reactor... no one die that day thanks to some weir miracle.

any way, he is a friendly to talk person, and if he sees good on you, he will even repair and adjust your ms free of any charge, he likes people who like their ms and treat them with respect.
he sometimes forget he is not talking to mechanics but pilots, and will start talking about mechanical parts and radio active supercores.

his current ms is a ultra custom I.W.S.P. dagger (is a strike rogue, but he couldn't find the face), build from scrap parts of broken ms.


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Please do, A Team work usually better than one man work.

If you don't mind, You can help to edit my work there. So I can focus more on storyline development.

And chap #3 is in progress. I need to gather some material first. Like how you guys like to do the Pvp (I don't need to see how Ryuma do his game, already experienced it firsthand). So I'll need some references to make fighting scene more, and lot more better.
id love to play a game with you but the problem is... i dont know your IGN and i still have no F91 tho
 
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Ok I'll post the revised edition in a few day's time.
Idea for Original gold frame custom:
MBF-P01#666 GoldFrame S.T.E.A.L.T.H
Weapons:
"Igelstellung" 75 mm multi-barrel CIWS x2(Mounted on head)
Type 70 beam saber x2,on backpack
Trikeros system#2 x1(mounted on left arm)
1.Beam shield mode
2.Beam claw mode(similiar to kyrios GN shield)
3.Beam bow mode(able to shoot at long range)
Mirage colloid system
Variable Phase Shift Armor
Optional Armaments:
Type 71 beam rifle x1
Origins: yet to be released

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