Shiro's Little Storytelling

[Shirogane]

Chapter #7 Uploaded. The longest chapter up till now, and the hardest one too TT

Hope all of you enjoyed reading this chapter. Sorry for the long delay. Thank U very much

[Vartio]

Celestial was... heavily different than I expected on it's appearance. The Zero system was a creepy but ugh touch to things. The Celestial though sent me shivers for appearing so soon, was expecting that thing to appear much later considering what that thing has for weapons...
*Yes, it was Celestial he mentioned in the End notes*
Really DID NOT See Celestial being an armored down STN-J Kai Kai, a bit of a shame that that was it's basic form.

A real note dude: please, learn to read through it twice or three times to make sure it sounds normal XD. You speak well on the forums but some of this seems rushed.

And please, you missed some major details. The Celestial was disabled entirely, but it wasn't recovered at all in the text yet seemingly he went with the enemies? A bit confusing. (I really can't attest to the rest, half of the time I thought I was on mars!)

[FellowSharcar]

I loved this chapter alot, though it did introduce several plot holes (which i hope to be filled) Several things:
1. Grammer, not trying to offend at all but if you need help with it, PM one of us with a link and we will grammer check it for ya
2. Tempest Gundam Quantinazation without Trans-Am awesome, Quantizing self and others too without Trans-Am even cooler, which leaves a question, how powerful is it when it goes Trans-Am?
3. Ellis and Shiro teaming up (figurtivily) and fighting off Master and Celestial was great.
4. GN Smoke Screen...awesome

[StrykerX]

nice job again grammar still needs fixing tho

[FellowSharcar]

Ugh where is the new chapter i want to see what happens...and judging from the time its been it could a very long read

[meltyace]

Where's the stealing!!!!!!!
We need freedom vs freedom clash.....
epic final battle of evil ryu...
Then
Maybe cliche battle won't work...

[FellowSharcar]

Originally Posted by meltyace

Where's the stealing!!!!!!!
We need freedom vs freedom clash.....
epic final battle of evil ryu...
Then
Maybe cliche battle won't work...

Awww but i (Siracco) want to be the one that kicks Ryu's ass lol

[Ryuma]

where's my gndrives. the thing that allows me to overpower every suit in the story even if everyone else goes against me. o.o

[Vartio]

Originally Posted by Ryuma

where's my gndrives. the thing that allows me to overpower every suit in the story even if everyone else goes against me. o.o

Plothax incoming (yea right):

I put a control mechanism in which causes them not to work anymore, and you don't know 'cause I'm that epic.

/sarcasm.

[FellowSharcar]

Originally Posted by Ryuma

where's my gndrives. the thing that allows me to overpower every suit in the story even if everyone else goes against me. o.o

Tempest Gundam armorsheded + X-Raiser = No matter what i will have an epic ass fight in which our machines rip each other apart haha

[meltyace]

Originally Posted by Vartio

Plothax incoming (yea right):

I put a control mechanism in which causes them not to work anymore, and you don't know 'cause I'm that epic.

/sarcasm.

Yes, you'll return in flashbacks.....

[Vartio]

Originally Posted by meltyace

Yes, you'll return in flashbacks.....

He made it clear that Celestial Gundam will return with it's FA Mode (Full Armor in that it didn't have even more than one weapon in that scene, the complete has about 20 Weapons (including multiple units of the same weapon)

[FellowSharcar]

Originally Posted by Vartio

He made it clear that Celestial Gundam will return with it's FA Mode (Full Armor in that it didn't have even more than one weapon in that scene, the complete has about 20 Weapons (including multiple units of the same weapon)

Wow, i hope GN-Arms T will be good enough to hold aganist that many.

[Vartio]

Originally Posted by FellowSharcar

Wow, i hope GN-Arms T will be good enough to hold aganist that many.

Let me summarize: You'd be a sitting duck. You're too big to avoid half of those. The Celestial's Full capabilities were made for Mass combat, taking out a single unit would be a bit easy.

[FellowSharcar]

Originally Posted by Vartio

Let me summarize: You'd be a sitting duck. You're too big to avoid half of those. The Celestial's Full capabilities were made for Mass combat, taking out a single unit would be a bit easy.

4 GN drives+Quintinazation+Trans-Am= maybe put up a fight lol

[Gundam00Raiser]

that looks OP, besides 00 Qanta still has 2 GN Drive

[Vartio]

Originally Posted by FellowSharcar

4 GN drives+Quintinazation+Trans-Am= maybe put up a fight lol

All I can say is: Pft, Quantization. Not really a major deal as long as you don't stay still like a dumbshit. Then again... *looks at the bad battle quality*

[FellowSharcar]

Originally Posted by Vartio

All I can say is: Pft, Quantization. Not really a major deal as long as you don't stay still like a dumbshit. Then again... *looks at the bad battle quality*

Maybe he will improve upon it, you can only do so much without it being in animation. Though i looking forward to some very good high end fights. Use your imagination when reading it helps.

[FellowSharcar]

Originally Posted by Vartio

Plothax incoming (yea right):

I put a control mechanism in which causes them not to work anymore, and you don't know 'cause I'm that epic.

/sarcasm.

I smell Trial System hax lol

[Shirogane]

First of all, I must say sorry for my absent for this past month.

I won't give you all any lame excuses, but, I feel that I must tell you my reasons why.

First of all, Because of the increase of my responsibility along with leveled up position my work, I can't have any extra time at all for playing and stuff.
Secondly, It will be hard for me to keep in touch in this forum too, as severals private problems as a newlywed.

So, I hereby announced that from this moment, Sunday, June, 27 - 2010 at 22:25:10 (Japan, Sapporo's time) I give all of my SDGO account to my younger brother, who, from now on will play as IGN: Hoppa and IGN: Shrogane.

But, I planned to continue this story till the end, I will have this story ends properly to be enough to be a parting gift from me to all of you.

Lastly, I must say sorry and thank you to all of the people here that already become my dearest friend and an important supports to me, although we may never meet in game at all.
Because of your supports I can continue on until now, So, Thank you very much and Sayonara.
With Gratitude,

Shirogane


P/S: thanks for everyone that have keep up with me until now. Please get along with the 2nd Shirogane. Sayonara...