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Where the heck is part 3?
I'll try to get it on here by tomorrow, hopefully.
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Part Three

When Kana came to, she had a severe pain in her side, a throbbing head, and a few bandages wrapped up her head and legs.
She felt so much pain that she started to tear up immediately.
After sitting for a little to ease some of the pain away, she noticed her hospital band and focused on the name. "N.O.B. M.E.D.I.C.A.L." She read aloud to her self and tried to remember whether she's ever been there or not, while she thought, the memory of CJack hit her like nothing before.
She gasped and immediately threw off the remaining covers covering her feet and slowly tried to stand up.
Taking a few minutes, she held on to her night stand breathed deeply and let go of the night stand. Only making it a few feet before collapsing to the floor with a loud thud, a carpet to save her from injury of her wooden floor, she sighed at herself and decided to lay there.

Closing her eyes, she didn't feel like moving, but a few minutes later, her mom rushed up and helped her get up.
"Honey!" She said frantically, "Why are you out of bed?!"
All Kana could do was say, "C-CJack. . ."
With this she fell asleep again.

Down at the hospital, Dr.Jones, along with the security guards from the library were headed to the room CJack were in.

Guard 1: "How is he doctor?"

Dr.Jones: "It doesn't look as if he'll make it through the day."

Guard 3: "I feel bad, that girl really liked him."

Guard 2: "That girl he pushed? Right?"

Guard 1: "Yeah, she'll be heart bro--"

With this, the doctor dropped his clipboard.
CJack was nowhere to be found inside his room, and the window was still locked, where could he be?
"Where could that kid be?" Dr.Jones pondered.
"We'll survey the area." Guard 1 said, with this, all three left.
The doctor was too busy with other calls, so he had no choice but to leave.

Hanging inside the curtains, wrapped into a circle, CJack slid down.
"Only a few bandages." He muttered to himself as he carefully peeled around the corner in search for the other guards.
With the coast clear, he ran towards an emergency exit, but had to stop, cause he had passed a snack machine and was hungry.
Learning how to wire the machine to get whatever he wanted, he chose to get a ton of stuff, to share with Kana.
Just the thought of her made him feel sad, but he couldn't lose hope.
Packing his bag full of chips, candy, drinks and gum, he set himself off, chewing a piece of Juicyfruit.
Running at the emergency exit full speed, he yelled parkour! as loud as he could and jumped on a chair then used it to slide over some wet puddles, not wanting to know what it was since it was every color but clear.
Yelling parkour! had attracted the guards, who were busy eating.
They tried to take chase of the boy, but failed as he was too fast.
He jumped off the chair and took in the pain as he rolled to slow his momentum, then he walked through the door, pushing up his glasses as the alarm went off.
Once outside, he knew exactly where he was, so he started towards the library.
Not knowing where Kana lived, CJack's only hope to find her was to think about all the things she's told him about her trips to the library.
"Ah! I got it!" He said as the image of the apartment complex Kana lived in hit his brain. "It pays to be smart."
After a few minutes of running, he chose to walk the rest of the way.
"Okay, being smart and not athletic, has some conflictions." He said, out of breath.
While walking, he noticed the slight sound of sirens and flashing lights in the distance rushing at him.
Taking no chance, CJack decided to run into a nearby grocery store.
Watching the cops drive by AND take down a different car, inside a bank parking lot, CJack just sat and stared, seeing that he was being a bit too paranoid, he quickly hurried down to the only apartment complex that had ice worth slipping on.
"Woah, Icy." He said feeling like a nerd afterwards.
With that moment, he breathed deeply, then walked into the complex.
"First things first." He said, entering the building, searching for signs of where to find Kana.
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how do you mess with the vending machine in a hospital without anyone noticing
 
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how do you mess with the vending machine in a hospital without anyone noticing
I should probably go with saying it was a vending machine along a higher floor, and maybe they over look him since he's just a kid.

(If anyone were to walk past him for that matter.)

But, it didn't take him long to pick the lock, i'll say that.

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CJack is OP.
 
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CJack is OP.
Yes, Yes.

We shall figure out how exactly he survived that explosion, and WHY the library blew up in the first place.

All in part four.
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I'm betting 10$ that the teddy did it. He knew that CJack was gonna tap Kana's fine Japanese Bootay, and he knew the only way he could a piece of that action was to save Kana from the fire that he started. Unbeknownst to him, CJack had already started another fire to put out his fire, which somehow lead to more fires.
 
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I'm betting 10$ that the teddy did it. He knew that CJack was gonna tap Kana's fine Japanese Bootay, and he knew the only way he could a piece of that action was to save Kana from the fire that he started. Unbeknownst to him, CJack had already started another fire to put out his fire, which somehow lead to more fires.
Not even close.
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Where the heck is part 4?
 
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Where the heck is part 4?
Here you go!
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Part Four.

CJack walked into the complex and began to analyze the posters for any signs of Kana's address.
After atleast 45 minutes of reading he decided to take a break.
"Hmm." He thought. "Where else could I look. . ."
While thinking of possible ways to find Kana, he heard familiar voices.

"How will we break this to her?" A voice said.

"I don't know, but it wont be easy." Another voice said.

"I just hope shit doesn't get too real." The third replied.

CJack hid around a dark corner and looked to see where the voices were coming from.
To his shocking surprise, it was the doctor and the guards!

"This is definitely a miracle on my behalf." CJack said.

"Maybe we should just tell her that he died." The doctor said, "It would make things a lot easier."

One guard agreed, but the other stayed silent.
The Doctor and the guards knocked on door N8 And out came Kana's mom.
CJack watched as the doctor and guards conversated with Kana's mom.

"Just as beautiful as Kana is." CJack thought.

As he watched, he saw Kana step into the doorway, he got closer so he could hear the conversation.

"We're sorry to tell you this, Kana." The doctor started, "But CJack didn't make it."

CJack saw as Kana dropped her favorite stuffed animal and ran inside.

"We'll be leaving now, Ms.Soto." The doctor said.

"Good Day." The guards said, in unison.

With this, they left.
CJack decided not to interrupt and just go after they left, to lessen the shock.
CJack knocked on the door and out came Ms.Soto again.

"Hello, who are you?" She asked.

"Erm." CJack replied, "I'm Sam. I'm here to see Kana."

"She's in a bit of a bad state right now." She explained. "So it's better if you'd--
CJack interrupted her in mid sentence. "I'm positive I can fix the situation."
With this, he asked for permission to enter, and was granted it.
It wasn't hard to find Kana's room, due to the sobbing coming from it.
When CJack saw her, emotions filled him up.
He ran inside and hugged her.
Kana raised her head in shock and saw that it was CJack.
Lost for words all she could mutter was. "W-wha. . .? H-ow?" She stammered, "T-they said--"
"Shhhh." CJack said, And with this, he kissed and hugged her.
Crying tears of joy now, Kana returned the favor with a kiss and a hug too.
Peering in from the doorway, Kana's mom knew that was CJack, and thought to herself.
"Wouldn't it have been easier to get in if he had told me his real name in the first place?"

"So doc." Guard 1 said. "What do we do about the little boy?"

"Easy." He explained, "Delete his medical records."

"Isn't that illegal?" Guard 2 asked.

"Are you getting paid to be a detective? No. A Lawyer? No. A Guard? Yes. So do your job." He said.
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RIP in pieces, CJack's insurance plan. Big Pharma wins again.
 
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Very Funny.

In Part Five, we'll go into a different POV, as in, well. . .

How to explain. . .

I'll just say we'll find out how the fire started, how CJack knew it was going to happen, and what the doctor did with CJack's info.
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Somehow this got me intrigued a little bit. >_<
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