Lime builds are pretty much straight forward as there aren't many variety you can choose from. Thankfully, Lime doesn't need too many skill points to be effective, so you may end up with lots of spare points.
And with that in mind... looks nearly perfect.
And you could use remaining 5 points to just go ahead and max Biki Lime, Pang Lime Shung, and MP Recovery... but that's just me.
But I'd ditch Mana Potion, if I were you. It's totally useless, more so as you level up. At lowest skill level, it doesn't give enough mp to do anything, while higher skill level requires useless regents. Besides, your MP Recovery should fix any mp problems you may have.
My 2 copper.
Sparks fly as swords dance, and the steel spurs create an unearthly rhythm. The battleground is a wonderful opera that can only be performed once.
In order to engrave this sight upon my memory, I gaze unblinking at the unfolding drama.
Ah, how could this be? My comrades fall, one by one. This beautiful yet sad scene is a garden of roses, blown away by the brisk outdoor wind--
W-Wait, I'm the only one left! What do I do now!?