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08-09-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Speech Help Please Guys!

This is my speech so far, What i need to know is this:

Do you think it will be enough? Its for my english class (Last Year English class, top one at highschool...) IE: Time wise, information wise.
Does it make sense?
Is there anything else I could add? ._.

Its got to be at LEAST 6mins long.. so... what do you guys think?

Oh yeah, and I have two days to finish this in...and practice it..
Speech topic:
Deception:
The Deception of the senses.

Spoiler!


/is nervous.

Thats all I got so far... Think it will be enough?
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paragraph 3: "very first beginnings" - "first beginnings" is redundant, get rid of "first"

paragraph 10: "what morons." Get rid of this. Also, you can use Durian as a great example here.

This is a fine report, good job.

Also, when you used Sherlock Holmes as your example for visual scrutiny, I couldn't help but think of the Cottingley Fairies.
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Thanks Ethane, I'll make those corrections soon.
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