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Burning Scars of Her Beauty

Posted 10-17-2008 at 05:32 AM by simplyecks
Updated 10-17-2008 at 05:48 AM by simplyecks
Category: Writing and Poetry


Burning is her image when my eyes close

Scars emerge when awe stuck by her glamour

Her presence lingers my wounds exposed

Beauty too lovely and too hard to ignore



Closed off is my heart to that of any other

Ignored the blood flowing from the cut she caused

Glamour only equal to the majestic beauty of skies

Exposed lies uncovered, my trust grows no further



Skies pour rain even on the hottest and sunniest of days

Caused only from the shadow of her thought, I'm dazed

Further as time goes the chance again will I ever love?

Others can't compare, will I get back my angel from above?



Dazed, dumbstruck from the touch of her lips on mines

Love distilled, life halted she used to help me just shine

Above us no one, with her I used to feel on top of the world

Days now pass at a snails pace, when will the scars just unfurl?

I wrote this poem a certain way, hope you notice, as always comment if you wish and drop some kudos if you feel its derserving! If you didn't notice then I'll tell you what I did in this poem. First I used the title as the first words in each sentence on the first paragraph. Then I used the last words in the first sentence to start the second paragraph and so on.

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