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Enemies - A Fanfiction

Posted 10-20-2008 at 07:39 PM by DemiGodDanzig
-Authors Note-
This is a prelude of a story that i've had in my head for awhile,about a person many of us know.You might get it from the beginning of the story,but in the end you'll definitely know who it is.I haven't wrote in foreverrrrr so don't bite ;o;


He has always been there from the beginning it seems, from preschool to even now. He's there, one-upping him every chance he gets. You could say it started casually, but gradually became a secret competition between them, without even knowing exactly when, and how. His nemesis, his rival, a gray haired kid with a penchant for smellen' yah later. He can still recall their first meeting in kindergarten. He sat there and played with his blocks, when a shadow appeared behind him, and knocked down his blocks with a swift kick from behind. Oh how he cried that day, and he learned to fear the shadow of this fiend, this wretched block kicker. Elementary school was just the same, but filled with different circumstances. If he could spit a loogie 2 feet far, his opponent could spit it 3 fit farther. If he ever made a 2 pointer, you can bet he was behind, scoring a 3. An eternal circle.

One would wonder why him, why go to such lengths? Was it because he was weaker then the rest? Less out spoken then most? No, the answer lies far deeper then that. In them lies the same dream, the same goals in life. To obtain the coveted title to which few may receive. Every year that goes by, they realize how close they are to getting one step closer to adventure. Fate is cruel as is evident in this struggle.

A few years later
The alarm rings out, he moans and groggily as he knocks it down. With a sigh he lays there as he stares at his ceiling. He smiles and contemplates his dream. There he was, in the Pokemon League, his venasaur ready to win when that damn alarm had to wake him up. He lies in silent thought, then with a gasp, he jumps out of bed. He throws his clothes on as fast as he could and ran out. "Todays the day!" was the only thought that crossed his mind as he ran out the door.

Authors Note 2

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  1. Mitchi's Avatar
    His nemesis, his rival, a gray haired kid with a penchant for smellen' yah later.
    That made me lol.

    Proofreading will help a little, but other than that, you've done a pretty good job with writing here.

    I wouldn't mind reading more.
    Posted 10-26-2008 at 08:39 PM by Mitchi Mitchi is offline
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