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06-26-2010   #21 (permalink)
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I love the color scheme of this picture. The only that strikes me awkward is the yellow stuff on the far right side. I think that's a light reflection, but it's at a weird shape though.
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@Glarbage: I like the lighting, but not a fan of the effects you used. It doesn't flow right and kinda ruins any depth.
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A good SOTW entry that beat my pirate Nero. A very nice smooth look. My complains being an insufficient amount of effects, weird circles in the bottom left, not enough lighting, and lack of depth.
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@xKakashi
The boarder makes the sig "feel" contradicting. When I look at your signature without focusing on the boarder, the colors are cool, the glow is calm, the text is transparent and the overall effects aren't too jittery everywhere. There isn't a lot of action in the when I look at your signature. It feels at peace, but when I look at your boarder, it makes it feel like an action movie or something epic is about to happen. The color selection is prefect though for a relaxing looking tag. As what Kenjii said, there's too many jittery circles around the bottom left. It could use a little more lighting in my opinion.

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The right breast seems a little flat or uneven. I think it's the extra line in the cleavage and the curve of its right side that's decreasing its depth. The left arm needs a bit more shading between the wrinkles because it's not balance with the shading on the other arm. The umbilicus or the belly button looks out of place from a quick glance. The shading on the right hair piece makes the hair feel too 2D. You could try extending the shadow while decreasing its opacity while going down the hair a little more or just lower the shading opacity all together. You could try changing the shadow color to something more pinkish to bring out the skin color a bit more so it feels a bit healthier too. It looks really good though and it's better than what I can do :>

I can't really critique on unfinished work because I don't know what your plans are with that picture :<
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Too much photoshop colored/editted pics :P
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Seems misproportioned. Like if she stood straight up one arm would be longer than the other, the torso would seem long, etc.
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@Valase
I can't really say anything about the 1st one because I feel like it's more about fan work so detail to the original proportions are what's focused on. Your second picture could use some more shading patch work on the hair behind the head. It looks pretty well done though :>

@Zeyru
Without the boarder, the image looks so full to my eyes (another way of saying it is that it makes me move my eyes more to look at it) which is good. The extra glowing lines make the image kind of hard to follow. It feels like there's multiple flowing paths. The shading on the head feels out of place and quickly it confuses me where the lighting is coming from. The extra darken on the left side makes the color scheme feel less bright and out of harmony. The bottom right feels too bright or empty from the extra lighting. I noticed you erased some extra blur effects and decreased the sharping in some areas of the picture and it's easier on my eyes as I move across your tag

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Not much I can add on this except if you want to make it a little more appealing, you could try using a ruler when shading with lines and the areas of shadowing. By how the shadows are shaped, it feels like the light source is at the same height as her mouth as if there's an invisible candle right there. The shadow shading behind the left arm feels a bit jagged though. There's also some places where the shadowing goes beyond the lines like on the hair and pony tails. It also feels like the iris are bit curved against each other or they don't have the same curvatures. The character looks really cute though :3


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It looks goos as it is, she is well drawn. However I think making the shading on the character herself and the background different to eachother would make her stand out more. Maybe making the lines thicker, thinner, or closer together to create different types of light and dark. This goes for the shading on the body and clothing too.
 
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Not bad at all. I would pay attention to your effects you used for lighting on the upper left. They move against the flow of the airplanes.

And composition, probably not the best to have all those airplanes jam packed in the bottom left half.
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I haven't started editing with the airplane sig yet. Also, I'm trying this new color layout. I'm not sure if I'm lacking depth or anything, so I'm stumped :s

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Yeah, it's definitely lacking some depth. I mean, I can see that you blurred the background in an attempt to remedy that. Another good fix would be to tone down the colors of the background a little bit... Maybe use a photo filter, and erase parts of it that are in the foreground. Doing things like that should definitely help.
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