Know that you've spent some time making this, but I do have some comments though.
If your making a guide, you've got to be precise. Use proper terms like "someone" instead of-some1.
Its never nice to use this-"don't get raped"
Another thing to note, since this is a guide, it should be an-all-rounder guide in the sense-A perspective from everyones view.
-You shouldn't be stating this like "mage should ice wall in front of him". If this is the case, den your title should be "A Dainn's job in Kanhel guide"
I know this is your guide and I shouldn't be commenting too much on this. Pardon me if I'm overboard.