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11-26-2007   #4 (permalink)
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Know that you've spent some time making this, but I do have some comments though.

If your making a guide, you've got to be precise. Use proper terms like "someone" instead of-some1.

Its never nice to use this-"don't get raped"

Another thing to note, since this is a guide, it should be an-all-rounder guide in the sense-A perspective from everyones view.
-You shouldn't be stating this like "mage should ice wall in front of him". If this is the case, den your title should be "A Dainn's job in Kanhel guide"

I know this is your guide and I shouldn't be commenting too much on this. Pardon me if I'm overboard.
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