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10-10-2010   #86 (permalink)
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IGN: Nasu Kha
Class: Carpenter lt_knight
Level: 60
Guild: Rapscallions
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Wow. ANYWAY -

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Originally Posted by Dani
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sorry about the messiness or if i raped your oc lol

and
something i doodled and shaded quickly in business. and don't ask me whats going on but I believe he's leaping or something barefoot while IN A BATTLE. The one leg looks short since i was trying to make it look further away (forshortening, worked better on his right leg) but meh.

Nice work on both of these, a few things that could be touched upon though:

On the top one, where the hair connects to the forehead on the right side (character left). Feels kind of awkward, maybe if you pulled some of the line-work to the left a bit, I don't know. Just a thought.

On the bottom one, in most spaces the shading seems correct, but I think the hands, inside of the shirt (the part of the inside you can see, near the stomach), and the right foot, seem a bit off. Though, you did say it was quick so of course we shouldn't be expecting a fully refined piece or anything.

Overall they're nice though.
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