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07-03-2010   #35 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by k0n
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Not bad at all. I would pay attention to your effects you used for lighting on the upper left. They move against the flow of the airplanes.

And composition, probably not the best to have all those airplanes jam packed in the bottom left half.
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