Want to help fellow artists? Need advice or opinions?

The purpose of this thread is to help graphic designers with more perspectives and ideas from other people with any graphic artwork they have. There's no limitation to what visual design you can submit in this thread so photography, graphic design, drawings, movies, poems or even origami is fine. Just remember these few rules -
Rules (please read before posting and all ggFTW's rules still applies to this thread)
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If you can't take criticism, then please don't post. If you don't want opinions from others, then this is the wrong thread for you. If you're just looking for compliments or want to fascinate the viewers, you may make another thread for it
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Do not submit other people's works without their consent.
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Give constructive criticism. This thread's purpose is to improve the artist. Simply saying, "I hate it", or "it looks nice" will not do. Give some reasons to it. Make it meaningful.
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Keep it work safe. This is still a forum for ages 13+.
Anyone is welcome to critique or submit a work as long as you follow the rules above
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I'll start first :P
It's an old picture of mine, but I still don't know what else to add. I drew the picture and edited afterward.