Originally Posted by kyoshiro8106
sorry guyz i guess my bad habit is always on the run all my works are all unfinished actually,
but next time i do something i'll finish it for sure, actually reishiki i'm happy with your comments 'cuase you point out, the faults that i'm kinda bothered with, THnx reinshiki.
um here is Natsuki from Mai Hime
Dood, this is NSFW man. But whatever, I'll just see what I can do.
There should be more of a body line going up around the breast area to indicate the body line down to the navel, the breast looks like it's merged together with the back.
Right hand is okay, but the left hand's fingers are too thick. You need to thin them abit and make more lines.
Also, don't be lazy and hide the other finger. (I can see the thumb is covered to show she's taking off her swimsuit/panties, but her other finger is hidden.
Her spine line is slightly off the middle. You should know what to do.
Her palm area also look too rocky. You need to round it.
I can safely declare that you main problem is the anatomy of the human hands. Especially the palm.
If you can fix that problem, I'm sure you can produce your work better. However, other flaws may be showing, so don't think that's all you need to fix. Keep working hard.
Well, I had a few sessions with a teacher before who pointed out my flaws last year.
So, I'm not sure if I can be considered pro, but I will consider uploading my works.
Also, I just like to point out the flaws for people so they can improve themselves. But I need some of it my own, so I'm helping them and me.
It's like killing two birds with one stone. =x